Documentary - Fourth Draft

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The ident was good with straight to the point information about Documentary.
The presenter part &in between shots were really good throughout the documentary.
The music definitely improved in co-ordination with the moving picture.
The use of teachers as a professional opinions and views.
The voice overs with the stop start animation.

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Typing shots still far too long.
Could not hear the question the presenter asked the public interviewees or their responses.