Today is the DEADLINE for our 3rd Draft and we are feeling pretty confident about what we have done, we know there are a few things that need to be added or changed but tomorrow we are getting the chance to come in and miss will be able to tell us if there are any major as well as minor changes that she would recommend.
The feedback we got for this draft were;
WWW
Good improvements from our first & second draft.
But could still be improved in certain areas - just look over and see what could be missing.
EBI
The ident was too long/ it did not get to the point quick enough on the information of the Documentary.
The typing shots need to change angle or be removed all together.
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