Documentary - Second Draft

After showing our 2nd Draft to our Target Audience, this was their response;

WWW
The ident we used was good.
Our sop start animation.
and the use of our Timeline.

EBI
It as incomplete.
It was too short (under the 5minute expected).
No backing music - made it boring & was repetitive.
The music comes in at the wrong time resulting in a lack of cordination with the images & sound.
The ethnographic was long & repetitive.
The presenter came in far too late.